Only a couple of issues I can see with this so far…her right lower leg seems to be missing somehow. I like her pose, the angle of her head and face, cool outfit and despite all you say about your inability to draw hands, the hands are very good :p Oh another thing I just noticed, her right upper arm is too thin, there should be at least a little bit of roundness there at the bicep, it’s a little out of proportion with the rest of her. And her left lower arm is a wee bit long.
Also, I think you need to move her head and neck back along her shoulders a little bit towards her left shoulder, her neck is not quite centre, even with the perspective as it is.
the leg I knew about, but I was kinda hoping you wouldn’t notice
Its a bad position for that right leg… makes it a bit difficult to put it in without complicating the image and making it a bit hard to read, but i’ll keep messing with it and get it going good…
so what do you think about a forum? i’m setting one up now..
um, well… in life in general I think all living things need bigger boobs. aw, I would even say non-living things like cars and door handles. Its my new philosphy: “the answer of happiness is not state of happiness, its the aquisition of bigger boobs”. One must find the corner of its own butt to understand that. think and ponder over this my learned friend.
Hows this Seona?
The leg, I think i’m sticking to my “It’s under the thigh” story cause i think it will work once I put the shading in (her right leg is a lot lower and much more bent than her left… I’m open to suggestions)
hows the rest of it now? (roll over to display the original to compare)
Yes that’s a marked improvement! I’d still like to see another foot there somehow, just can’t work out how. When I get a chance tomorrow do you mind if I chuck it into Alias and see if I can figure out where it has to go?
yeah I think maybe the top of a boot squeezed in there around her crotch somewhere.. it’s really bugging me… yeah take it into alias and have a squiz when you get a chance.. i’d really appreciate it before I start with the inking..
…If you toggle the mouse over & off again repeatedly, she looks like a female Quagmire-from-Family-Guy “giggidy-giggidy”-ing whatever’s going on behind the curtain…
Only a couple of issues I can see with this so far…her right lower leg seems to be missing somehow. I like her pose, the angle of her head and face, cool outfit and despite all you say about your inability to draw hands, the hands are very good :p Oh another thing I just noticed, her right upper arm is too thin, there should be at least a little bit of roundness there at the bicep, it’s a little out of proportion with the rest of her. And her left lower arm is a wee bit long.
Also, I think you need to move her head and neck back along her shoulders a little bit towards her left shoulder, her neck is not quite centre, even with the perspective as it is.
yeah you’re totally right on all points there
the leg I knew about, but I was kinda hoping you wouldn’t notice
Its a bad position for that right leg… makes it a bit difficult to put it in without complicating the image and making it a bit hard to read, but i’ll keep messing with it and get it going good…
so what do you think about a forum? i’m setting one up now..
i think the boobs need to be bigger……
yours?
um, well… in life in general I think all living things need bigger boobs. aw, I would even say non-living things like cars and door handles. Its my new philosphy: “the answer of happiness is not state of happiness, its the aquisition of bigger boobs”. One must find the corner of its own butt to understand that. think and ponder over this my learned friend.
hahaha… I will relinquish my conscious mind to the contemplation of the corner of my own butt…
she shall have bigger boobs!
Hows this Seona?
The leg, I think i’m sticking to my “It’s under the thigh” story cause i think it will work once I put the shading in (her right leg is a lot lower and much more bent than her left… I’m open to suggestions)
hows the rest of it now? (roll over to display the original to compare)
Yes that’s a marked improvement! I’d still like to see another foot there somehow, just can’t work out how. When I get a chance tomorrow do you mind if I chuck it into Alias and see if I can figure out where it has to go?
PLEASE!
yeah I think maybe the top of a boot squeezed in there around her crotch somewhere.. it’s really bugging me… yeah take it into alias and have a squiz when you get a chance.. i’d really appreciate it before I start with the inking..
…If you toggle the mouse over & off again repeatedly, she looks like a female Quagmire-from-Family-Guy “giggidy-giggidy”-ing whatever’s going on behind the curtain…
hahahah
Ok. This is about where the leg should be as far as I can work out.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y9/Seona/Photos_notmine/Spygirl.jpg